I dont care about your story I care if you will engage me and can you tell a story to keep me.
how do your various characters tell the same stories
"jaiden animations" is an interesting character
Scott Myer's writing Voice
Format Experiment
3 journals from
3 time periods which makes
1 story.
In the play tests the antient classical format is the easiest to read and get engaged with as it requires no learning and is directly internal so you can see the feelings while the others are external perspectives.
Another option that both makes it faster to produce and gets around the above issues is a preface explaining that the book was interpreted from these 3 sources so we can write the whole book classicly with the emersive context handwaved.
Strategy